this is my version of a poem by li po:
while i was waiting
the outside steps have become wet with the dew
that has soaked my stockings
letting down the crystalline blinds
i gaze at his absence in the clear autumn moon
some aspects of the sense are not really capturable to our culture since this is an upper class woman in the palace, maybe a lady in waiting to the emperor's concubine
'crystalline blinds' does dual service as literal blinds and tears
eraza pound's translation of the same poem by Li Po, which he titled "The Jewel Stairs Grievance"
The jeweled steps are already quite
white with dew,
It is so late that the dew soaks my
And I let down the crystal curtain
And watch the moon through the
"jewel stairs, therefore a palace. grievance, therefore there is something to complain of.
gauze stockings, therefore a court lady, not a servant who complains.
clear autumn, therefore he has no excuse on account of the weather.
also she has come early, for the dew has not merely whitened the stairs, but has soaked her stockings.
the poem is especially prized because she utters no direct reproach."
david hinton's translation:
Night long on the jade staircase, white
dew appears, soaks through gauze
She lets down crystalline blinds,
through jewel lacework at the autumn